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I've never really written a critique before, so please don't hate me
The shading is great, I think it's really cool how you mixed something as real as aging into something as unreal as...well, this. I can see you put a lot of work into the spikes and the teeth. The words in the last scene seem to be jumping out at me, but that could just be the coffee....Anyways, The flames coming from his mouth are really nicely drawn, although you could put some smoke to add affect....well, that's it....don't hate me, please!! I already have enough people hating me