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I Tried Drawing Manga. by DukeStewart I Tried Drawing Manga. by DukeStewart
A re-drawn extract from Blood Lad. -> [link]

Definitely critique requested. I personally think it's in the good-not-great realm.
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shadow3338182000 Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2016   General Artist
I love blood lad! >♦<
Awsome!
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AlalaChan Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Student Digital Artist
Cool
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GalifreyGirl Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013
An i the only one who thought is said, 'My goal is Funyuns Resurrection'? or am I just dyslexic?
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Clockwork-Demons Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Looks pretty decent, the style is different from the manga's but it's not bad. I think the girls eyes might be a bit too low on her face though. Just a thought...
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Alkenstine Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2012
im going to hold back my anger at how this looks different from the original because its still good and hell if you read this great
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nick-cereal97 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Student General Artist
It's a whole different style from the original but it looks pretty awesome!
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Cel-sy Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2011
get the faces right >:(
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Elf-healer Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2011
I really like it! That little animal is cuter than the actual manga's version XD
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Wilfre123456 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
uuuuuuuum not exactly manga
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infinite-arc Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2011
I found the narrative very difficult to follow. Other than that, and the depressing appearance of the characters making me want to weep, it's pretty darn good.
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25thquarterking Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2011  Student Traditional Artist
Dude, that looks awesome ^^
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Rino124 Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
STAZ-KUN!
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Bryce1350 Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice!
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orangepumpkins Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011
your drawings seem a bit more edgy, bold, and creepy than the original, but i quite like it like that.
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starcrest180 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
it looks really good
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Furuha Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Join us .

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Oh and very nice re-drawn :3
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IshaIchiinu Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I LOVE BLOOD LAD!!!
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You did well; but the eyes on the female need to be a little bit higher.
That is all.
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DaAmazingMeepers Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ooh, very nice!:meow:
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jewelriver Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Awesome~!
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USOtaku013666 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
I think it's great.
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Tikizip Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
i like it better than the original :)
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looptheloopy Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student General Artist
I really like it!
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Ghirox Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student General Artist
Well, in comparison to the original, yours got a little less realism in it, I find that more "attractive" the only bad critic is the shading in the girl's hair, its not as detailed in yours as in the original
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Rizathepenguin Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Student Digital Artist
'blood lad'? I'm not even going to ask... The guy at the bottom looks exceptionally creepy, but he does too in the link to the original page.... so I guess that's a good thing... This is really good, but I must say I personally prefer happy comic book book type things. =)
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SamGorsuch Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Like catc0617 said, The girl's head is shaped odly, and that makes it awkward looking. But otherwise the shading is fantastic, as well as the last panel. It was a very good first try.
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KindestdemonOtaku Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
<3 SO MUCH LOVE YOU CAN HAVE IT ALL
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catc0617 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
A critique, eh? Alright then. (:

I actually think this is quite nicely done! The shading is well done, and the man's facial expression in the last panel is really, well, expressive! I think the one thing that bothers me is the girl's face shape, in the second panel. Otherwise, she's very well drawn, but I think her cheek comes in just a tad bit too much, and as a result, it seems to make her head look a bit awkward. Other than that, this is awesome!

Hope this was helpful to you! (:
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Irkenarmada1 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
coolio
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allen-mikk Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
It doesn't look bad.
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ZeimiTakahashi Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Looks really nice in the last panel, I like the shading. :heart:
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Darkcat13 Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011  Professional Digital Artist
wow, looks great :o
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